Here’s a glimpse into my in-manuscript feedback: Each comment is designed to guide you toward a stronger, more cohesive draft by highlighting areas that can deepen the impact of your story. From suggestions on pacing and character development to notes on dialogue, structure, and tone, my goal is to offer clear, actionable insights that align with your vision for the story. With these comments, you’ll have a roadmap for revisions that bring out the full potential of your work.